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Friday, 14 June 2013

My narrative


There are emperor penguins and they are.going fishing so they catch for  
their young ones because their young ones are getting faded. They were at the edge of the iceberg  the father was called mabel and the mother was called sarah with mabel  
but the father said  “there  is  no fish  oh no ”we can not get fish to give to the young ones but then lots and lots of fish were coming then all of the dads went to get fish.

Leopard seal is vicious predator so they can hunt for  penguins
they are going to kill penguins so they can eat them he could  not see any penguins  to eat he hungry but at last  he saw one penguin he said with a deep voice “yum yum’’ then he globed it                                  
up.And
then the happy full leopard seal was so full he had the worst
tamee bug that he has ever had then he swaim  all way home .                                                

1 comment:

  1. Great narrative Harlem i liked that you have put Really good words in your work.


    Your best mate Michael!

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