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Tuesday, 25 June 2013

My free juice

Then after they took a cartons they went behind their classroom. Then jacks friend luke put a straw through one a his cartons then he said “yum!!!” then jack said “to luke he not going to drink” then the second bell rang. Then he was thinking then he went to own up and Mr Renata said  “thank you for owning up” then luke was sad.
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  1. Unknown27 June 2013 at 19:25

    Harlem, when I read your paragraph it didn't really tell me what this story is about.

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