Do you want to get sunburned ? if you don’t read this“ You need a hat, sunglasses and sunblock.
You have to wear a hat to protect your head from the sun a trucker cap is the worst hat because it only protects the face. Not the back of your head and so you don’t get skin cancer on your head wear a fully covered hat.
You have to put sunscreen on to your body arms and legs so they won’t get burned from the sun and skin cancer. And a headache and don’t get burned when you're swimming or having a walk on the beach.
3 You will have to put on some glasses because you can’t see properly and you might get blind and get an headache. If you don’t wear sun glasses you don’t wear sun glasses you might get a headache and get blind from the brightness of the sun.
The way you stay safe in the sun is that if you were wearing a hat, sunglasses, and some sunscreen.
Hi harlem there was 2 problem in this story and one unfinished sentence.
ReplyDeleteHi, Harlem! My name is Julie Cornelson, and I'm a student at the University of South Alabama in the United States. I'm studying to become an elementary school teacher. I'm very close to the beach in Alabama, so I was glad to read your advice for not getting a sun burn. You are absolutely correct. The best way to avoid sun burns is to wear a fully covering hat and some sunscreen. Great advice! However, there are some grammatical errors, like run-on sentences and missing commas, in your post. My advice is to take your time when writing, and make sure you proofread before you post.
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