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Thursday, 27 March 2014

my knife and fork

Why do we use forks and knives?


Have you used a knife and fork before? If you haven’t you should try it because it will help you to not spread germs,  it is good manners and helps makes the food easy to eat.



Keeping clean
We keep our hands clean by using a knife and fork so we don't  get  dirty hands. Our sticky fingers won't get on our chromebooks,other people or books.  Also we won't get sick because the germs on our hands won’t be  put in our mouths.
 
Food pices
Have you eaten a hole lotta bread in your mouth?
it can’t fit in your mouth we cut it into small size pecas  to eat better with.
If you tried to eat a hole pizza it can’t fit IN YOUR MOUTH you slice into 8 pieces.


Manners
We use a knife and fork so we do not eat like a pig and so we can not drop any food on the floor. When we use knives and forks we don’t disturb other people from eating. It is good manners to eat with a knife and fork .




Conclusion
when I use forks and knives I feel like I am fancy.



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Zac
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Explanation Writing Assessment



Needs work
Getting there
Got it!
Title
No title or title doesn't have to do with the topic.
Title has to do with the topic but doesn't give very much information. (e.g. “Snails.”).
Title gives information about what the explanation will tell you (e.g. “How snails eat.”).
Paragraphs
Explanation is not broken into paragraphs.
Explanation has paragraphs but it does not have one idea per paragraph.
Explanation has one idea per paragraph, and includes an introduction and summary.
Vocabulary
There are no special words that relate to your topic.
There are some special words that relate to your topic, but some are missing.
All the special words that relate to your topic are there.
Grammar
Doesn't use joining words like because or so to show cause and effect.
Doesn't use timeless present tense.
Sometimes uses joining words to show cause and effect. Mostly uses timeless present tense.
Uses joining words to show cause and effect whenever this is needed. Always uses timeless present tense.
Sequencing
Explanation of events is not in sequence.
Explanation of events is mostly in sequence.
Explanation of events is in sequence.
Punctuation
Hardly ever uses full stops, commas and capital letters correctly.
Usually uses capital letters, commas and full stops correctly.
Almost always or always uses capital letters, commas and full stops correctly.


My next step is to have a title to do with the topic.

1 comment:

  1. Hey Harlem, really impressed with your work! Your Mum is here tonight for her netbook training, she is really enjoying seeing your blog!

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