Friday, 2 August 2013
crocodile that has no tongue
This story is about crocodile and a fox but the crocodile has no tongue ?
Once there lived a fox and her best friend was a crocodile so fox went to crocodile to ask if she allowed to lend crocodile tongue for her wedding
crocodile agreed but only if you bring it back so fox went to her wedding.
with a beautiful voice all the animal’s were amazed after the wedding zebra said fox can you walk home with me we'll singing with your beautiful
voice of your’s so fox walked home with zebra singing but fox broke the promise that crocodile said and that why the crocodile has no tongue.
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Harlem,
pt england,
pt england school
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You're trying really hard Harlem. There are a few mistakes and fullstops missing so remember to get a friend to check it and let me know to check it too before you post. Otherwise great effort.
ReplyDeletehi Harlem you have some mistakes.
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